Would you like to review and critique my first attempt at a Partenza Represa, a form by Dawn Slanker?

If I am getting this right you take the last word or words and then use them to start the next line, so on and so forth. That cannot be easy and you did an excellent job. That goes without saying, you are a bit of a celebrity on here with your poetry/ I love the last two lines. So haunting. A strong work